Yo
I just wanted to ask for some feedback for my latest bars. Please be honest!
(I am from a not english speaking country so please also tell me the grammatically mistakes that i made)
Started on a road, now climbing fuckin‘ stairs
People die behind my way but who the fuck cares
Success is on the top nearly there rock after rock
Shooting fake friends from the top armored with a hot glock
They came so far because of me left me behind and let me bleed
But I‘ll laugh last bitch that‘s a promise we gon see
You called us all a group but I was the fuckin
Slurping you‘re fuckin soup you don‘t have to feel the heat
So where are you know, can you see that black cloud
But I don‘t need you anymore now Im rapping for a crowd
Hear the lyrics feel the basse backstage purple haze
Dont gotta see your face now I walk the lonewolf way
Silver chain feel the fame take over the rap game
Music made me change I will never be the same
Let the loser behind ma ass now I‘m a rapper how it seems
Never going back in the past long live Street19
Copyright@Street19 2017
I just wanted to ask for some feedback for my latest bars. Please be honest!
(I am from a not english speaking country so please also tell me the grammatically mistakes that i made)
Started on a road, now climbing fuckin‘ stairs
People die behind my way but who the fuck cares
Success is on the top nearly there rock after rock
Shooting fake friends from the top armored with a hot glock
They came so far because of me left me behind and let me bleed
But I‘ll laugh last bitch that‘s a promise we gon see
You called us all a group but I was the fuckin
Slurping you‘re fuckin soup you don‘t have to feel the heat
So where are you know, can you see that black cloud
But I don‘t need you anymore now Im rapping for a crowd
Hear the lyrics feel the basse backstage purple haze
Dont gotta see your face now I walk the lonewolf way
Silver chain feel the fame take over the rap game
Music made me change I will never be the same
Let the loser behind ma ass now I‘m a rapper how it seems
Never going back in the past long live Street19
Copyright@Street19 2017
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