Tre Iccaruz- Who Better

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  • Tre Iccaruz- Who Better

    https://soundcloud.com/user-894093893/sets/tre-iccaruz





    https://soundcloud.com/tre-iccaruz/t...-damitrez-away

    Check out the kid.

  • #2
    Re: Tre Iccaruz- Who Better

    I liked it.
    Im white tho.

    Going forward i'd avoid rhymes bragging about d rose shoes.
    He's frail as fuck and his shoes all hit mad discount.

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    • #3
      Re: Tre Iccaruz- Who Better

      Thanks for the feedback.
      https://soundcloud.com/tre-iccaruz/t...-damitrez-away

      Check out the kid.

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      • #4
        Re: Tre Iccaruz- Who Better

        At first when I heard the beat I was like "dilla". It's maybe a little too familiar, but I guess it can pass. It's simplistic, but it's dope. The snares are good, nice feel. First rapper (Iccaruz I guess (btw, isn't that name like calling one self "the guy that went in over his head and crashed"?)) has a weak flow imo. It's waaay too mechanical and rythmless. Like Bada bada bada bada all the way through. Every 16th is not meant to be doubled with the voice, like when people sing the same notes as the instruments in choruses. The mouth is a jazz instrument, ment to be played fluently in all corners of the sound scape as an ever changing solo. As soon as the second rapper came on I felt relieve, cause he actually complimented the beat in some way. Not to diss, but change that shit up. Else it's good. Lyrics weren't that interesting to me, but it's all good. Real hop hop.

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        • #5
          Re: Tre Iccaruz- Who Better

          ^that comment was for Melodic Aerials btw. Heard a couple of the other songs. Keep doing your thing, it's good. The flow was better on the other songs, but still a tiny bit lacking. As far as Who Better, I ain't into the whole autotune scheme, but it worked fine. It was good there weren't actual verses, it had a nice feel; the Icarus bit also comes to life a bit more with that falling from the stars line. Still, the one rapper also doesn't quite hit the right notes on that autotune, even though it's well springled. Just my 2 cents.

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