Me stock and crunk jumped EF and fresco

[Fresco]

Re: Me stock and crunk jumped EF and fresco

but mommei y is steve jawbs slumpt???

[Gwame]

Re: Me stock and crunk jumped EF and fresco

if I ever see reznick you know he dead

it wont happen tho cuz even when eyerate was at an event, duke was hidin behind a large plant tryin not to get spotted like the grimace

catch me in the streets tho

SLUMP

organik would buy ef's plane tickets to toronto to slump rez






and ef aint even flyin there!!!!!!!!

[Nick]

Re: Me stock and crunk jumped EF and fresco

but mommei y is steve jawbs slumpt???

yo real talk



take the "I" out of the beginning of most of the lines where you use it


People dont wanna hear rappers keep saying "I" at the beginning of every bar, and its a common mistake.



If you take it out, the lines come off as more abstract and more poetic. It would make your verse I heard before the DF battle with the otbva shoutout 10x better.



I only make this suggestion because the verse is quality enough for me to warrant making it. But the quality will increase 10 fold if you take out the I's




dont get slumped

[BrowseR]

Re: Me stock and crunk jumped EF and fresco

y doe

dat aint zen

[Nick]

Re: Me stock and crunk jumped EF and fresco

I know




Tyler made me do it

[Tyler]

Re: Me stock and crunk jumped EF and fresco

yo real talk



take the "I" out of the beginning of most of the lines where you use it


People dont wanna hear rappers keep saying "I" at the beginning of every bar, and its a common mistake.



If you take it out, the lines come off as more abstract and more poetic. It would make your verse I heard before the DF battle with the otbva shoutout 10x better.



I only make this suggestion because the verse is quality enough for me to warrant making it. But the quality will increase 10 fold if you take out the I's




dont get slumped

i bullet proof the ride now i feel like armadillos