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  • check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

    first of all, Eminem killed this more than i ever will. he is one of my favorite poets and a huge influence on my style. check out my rendition of his deeply personal classic! feedback much appreciated, if you have music of your own, feel free to share!

    Petey Lee - Mockingbird (free verse) - YouTube

    peace & respect

    *Lyrics*
    I'm finally moving on in my heart not just my mind/
    The pain is gone with every dawn as i take part and watch it rise/
    I can see your eyes, cold as ice, freeze me til i crystallize/
    Sometimes we bleed inside just to know we're still alive/
    But i revived after i died, yet i was tied down by regret/
    That sinking feeling when you're thinking of all the things we ever said/
    I was laying in bed with memories replaying in my head/
    And only God was by my side so i chose to put Him first instead!/
    We broke bread til i was fed then our relationship began/
    When i put my plans in His hands and became a better man/
    Please understand that because i've loved you so/
    I had to let you go for us to grow like a rose underneath the snow/
    Cause we were so outta control, like two birds in a cage/
    Young & crazed and full of rage, your smile set my world ablaze/
    Our lips would graze as hips engage, you were afraid that things would change/
    From honeymoon to break up stage, i carry scars that'll never fade/
    At any rate, i had to recreate myself or detonate/
    And fight for this life that i elevate for i'm really not the type to wait for fate/
    When i make a mistake, then i innovate, no stressing just progression
    Cause there's always a lesson learned from every failure and rejection!/
    You question my profession but my fans believe i'll make it/
    I may not be a doctor yet i've always worked with patients (patience)
    I'm often imitated tho they can never replicate it/
    I'm too creative in my spaceship as i sabotage the matrix!
    † Rapping is a form of self expression, art in its purest form. the beat is my canvas & my lyrics are the brush, a painting that lasts forever.. http://www.youtube.com/PeteyLeeTV

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    Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

    Petey u aint kickin sick freebies ur raps make me sleepy
    either spit it sleazy or shut the fuck up and eatme
    Spark a woody gettin buzz like Lightyear

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      Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

      Originally posted by Clouds View Post
      Petey u aint kickin sick freebies ur raps make me sleepy
      either spit it sleazy or shut the fuck up and eatme
      okay hopefully this one will wake ya up, it's more upbeat with energy. thanks for listening!

      Petey Lee - Gangnam Style (free verse) - YouTube
      † Rapping is a form of self expression, art in its purest form. the beat is my canvas & my lyrics are the brush, a painting that lasts forever.. http://www.youtube.com/PeteyLeeTV

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        Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

        Well your no dumbfoundead but [MENTION=15874]Petey Lee[/MENTION] your the multi champ on here for now good work
        Unusual Suspects

        Originally posted by reallytho
        Thanks for body bagging me idk why i thought i could fuck with you John

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          Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

          Originally posted by Badass Johnny View Post
          Well your no dumbfoundead but [MENTION=15874]Petey Lee[/MENTION] your the multi champ on here for now good work
          wow that's such a great honor man, i appreciate that for real. damn, thank you. i shouldn't be compared to Dumb man, that's one of my bigger homies yo. i don't think i've earned the title yet, i only just joined the forum a couple days ago. lemme put some more work out!
          † Rapping is a form of self expression, art in its purest form. the beat is my canvas & my lyrics are the brush, a painting that lasts forever.. http://www.youtube.com/PeteyLeeTV

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            Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

            dude are u related to larry word
            Spark a woody gettin buzz like Lightyear

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            • #7
              Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

              dude are u related to jackie chan
              Spark a woody gettin buzz like Lightyear

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              • #8
                Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

                dude are u related to ichiro
                Spark a woody gettin buzz like Lightyear

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                • #9
                  Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

                  Well good shit man keep it up [MENTION=15874]Petey Lee[/MENTION] I respect the hustle people discredit asian rappers for some reason but I show love to any artist who I think are dope and usually the underdogs in hip hop D Pryde, Nikko Dator, Dumbfoundead, and Traphik all good talents
                  Unusual Suspects

                  Originally posted by reallytho
                  Thanks for body bagging me idk why i thought i could fuck with you John

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                    Re: check out my Eminem - Mockingbird (free verse)!

                    Originally posted by Badass Johnny View Post
                    Well good shit man keep it up [MENTION=15874]Petey Lee[/MENTION] I respect the hustle people discredit asian rappers for some reason but I show love to any artist who I think are dope and usually the underdogs in hip hop D Pryde, Nikko Dator, Dumbfoundead, and Traphik all good talents

                    i appreciate that my man. i agree with you. music has no color. it's universal. have a great weekend homey. peace & respect.
                    † Rapping is a form of self expression, art in its purest form. the beat is my canvas & my lyrics are the brush, a painting that lasts forever.. http://www.youtube.com/PeteyLeeTV

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