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  • AreDot vs Surt!fieD

    12 bars

    Surt's verse

    i'll put this mut down wit the pound u should quit RHYMES DOG CUZ YA LINES JUST BLOW SO THIS CLOWN IS CONCERNED
    u got fans? pfft only time you hear folk yelling R(arrrrr) its pirates and them niggas DIED OFF A LONG TIME AGO HO...BITCH NOW ITS UR TURN 2

    so if u seem to act sketchy...no pencil but i'll mark u out the frame like u an ERASED PICTURE
    yall think bud wiser?(Budweiser) then them cans spark & we see ur not hard u call it FREEBASE NIGGA 4

    my life is like I boonked the blunt cuz i'm speed ballin no WEED' LACED NIGGA
    u stuck in the dark watchin the stars pass u bye like a DEEP SPACE THRILLER 6

    his flows terrible...to him dope don't mean cool it means crack so I can tell he aint a PAST TENSE BUDDY
    dudes teeth probly fugly cuz sonny stay rollin around with the glass all in his face like CaRASH TEST DUMMY
    8
    homo u suck so much dick for pleasure u want to invent PRE PAYED JIZZ in the form of CHEESE SPRAY WIZZ
    bitch nigga ur garbage ass is just a slave to the rock like FREE WAY IS 10

    I let bullets get SENT TO UR HENCHMEN till them faggots are RENDERED DEFENSLESS
    this newbie NEVER GETS MENTIONS cuz Dot(.) is always last like the END OF A SENTENCE
    10

    i'll woop u anywhere up north, Midwest or even if u WERE IN MY SOUTH TOWN
    I b on fire so i'll get R sunned(arsoned) without BURNIN MY HOUSE DOWN 12
    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    AreDots verse
    Lets make it a classic.

    Poppin mad shit in the thread. Ima let this SISSY SEE.
    He challenged me. Now "dots on his ass" like he CHIPPY D.
    Ya mom tries to GET WITH ME. I cum all on her TITTY V.
    So its Sticky all over them C's like crips PITCHING TREE.

    But If its beef... Then Its kicks to ya door like EAST BAY.
    Me an 2 G's from my clan. with a Blind fold, 3 K's.
    We can Tie surt up... Like his phone Line on 3WAY
    Or sneak in..Headshot...he wont see it coming like a BLIND HOE BJ.

    I know crips and bloods. They Be with them GANG PLOYS.
    Wrong 'color' in ya 'pocket' they 'advance' it aint a GAME BOY.
    I MAY FLOYD, this nigga. Knock em out and run His POCKETS.
    That's a chin-check.. jeremy lins payments from the ROCKETS.

    Pull up hop out Popping surts (certs) like my BREATH STINK.
    Dump an Fire clips, sunken pirate ship, make his CHEST SINK.
    U icy? I'm a "jack boy" don't be FLASHING IT AT ALL.
    Cause If 'son is shining' i have blood SPLASHING IN THAT HALL.
    9
    Surt!fieD
    44.44%
    4
    AreDot
    55.56%
    5

    The poll is expired.

    Sabotage Ent
    "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

  • #2
    Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

    Lets make it a classic.

    Poppin mad shit in the thread. Ima let this SISSY SEE.
    He challenged me. Now "dots on his ass" like he CHIPPY D.
    Ya mom tries to GET WITH ME. I cum all on her TITTY V.
    So its Sticky all over them C's like crips PITCHING TREE.

    But If its beef... Then Its kicks to ya door like EAST BAY.
    Me an 2 G's from my clan. with a Blind fold, 3 K's.
    We can Tie surt up... Like his phone Line on 3WAY
    Or sneak in..Headshot...he wont see it coming like a BLIND HOE BJ.

    I know crips and bloods. They Be with them GANG PLOYS.
    Wrong 'color' in ya 'pocket' they 'advance' it aint a GAME BOY.
    I MAY FLOYD, this nigga. Knock em out and run His POCKETS.
    That's a chin-check.. jeremy lins payments from the ROCKETS.

    Pull up hop out Popping surts (certs) like my BREATH STINK.
    Dump an Fire clips, sunken pirate ship, make his CHEST SINK.
    U icy? I'm a "jack boy" don't be FLASHING IT AT ALL.
    Cause If 'son is shining' i have blood SPLASHING IN THAT HALL.

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    • #3
      Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

      Not bad at all... Lets see what surt got for ya

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      • #4
        Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

        That's a chin-check.. jeremy lins payments from the ROCKETS.

        BARS

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        • #5
          Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

          votes niggas

          [MENTION=24525]AreDot[/MENTION] im digging parts of ur verse man dope shit bro
          Sabotage Ent
          "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

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          • #6
            Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

            [MENTION=10651]Kapono[/MENTION] u redy for this battle or what nigga
            Sabotage Ent
            "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

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            • #7
              Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

              Good battle yo. Props. Got me excited for the track battle.

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              • #8
                Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

                Surt was like 24 lines not 12. Lines wont fit to a 4/4 bar, even rhymin doubletempo.
                Also, sorry surt, they were corny as hell.... the pirate shit? And the budweiser shit? C´mon son!
                (And people get the double´s, you dont have to write them like this everytime)
                (ITS CORNY!)

                Dot got this by a landslide.
                BODYBAG!

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                • #9
                  Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

                  ^^this nigga

                  ur garbage as fuck stfu dick face

                  yeah tight work AreDot
                  Sabotage Ent
                  "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

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                  • #10
                    Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

                    lol u mad?
                    Most of your lines are ½ a bar too long, thats a fact.
                    Corny ass sucker

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                    • #11
                      Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

                      Nigga dont b mad cuz all ur battles suck. Shit your name is corny u fugayzee ass faggot. And I will prove it
                      Sabotage Ent
                      "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

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                      • #12
                        Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

                        In fact ill body u ya bitch. Lets get it pussy
                        Sabotage Ent
                        "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

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                        • #13
                          Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

                          lol u mad as fuck hahahaha...

                          I´ll battle you some time next week if you want, or maybe sunday..
                          I have friday shit to do today.

                          Have a nice weekend. Stay mad!

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                          • #14
                            Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

                            Wanna hug it out [MENTION=13899]OTBVA[/MENTION] ?
                            We can be pals. Buddies! I'll fuck the fat ugly bitch your pretty girl brings with her and u can do the same for me

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                            • #15
                              Re: AreDot vs Surt!fieD

                              dots Lin line was fire. Surt your dot is always last like the end of a sentence was fire too. I gotta go with dot on this tho, don't get me wrong you both did your thing .

                              I think I subliminally inspired your budweiser line , not hatin
                              Maybe someone a little wiser can explain it for you , bud, drink up the knowledge

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