Give me eyeballs.

[Surt!fieD]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Dizaster???? Idk what I meen.
And week multies? If u wanna try to beat me in a battle be my guest im down. [MENTION=14229]Rahu[/MENTION]

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Since you people want to flood my thread, I went and read your text battle. Casey hit you with those fire punches man. Surt you had no chance. Both of you used weak gimmicks that made it hard for me to get through, like surt going (HAHAHAHAH) or Casey using Gifs to explain bars....very distracting.

That said, Casey won that battle pretty easily. His punches hit harder and his flow structure was easier to get through. Surt you multis are weak and this whole copying Dizaster mentality is going to get you plenty of losses, just like it has Dizaster.

It wasn't what I would call a body, but Casey took it pretty clearly.

[Tony Stanza]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Votes dont lie and its 10 to 10. Go back to suckin treys dick unisex. Lmao

go back to sucking your brother cix dick incest

Casey is a woman.....

Surt has a mouthful of his brothers skeet

Ur a girl. Casey. Ur period dropped yet ho

nope but I did put an end to you.....


thats nice nigga you gotta admit

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Votes dont lie and its 10 to 10. Go back to suckin treys dick unisex. Lmao

go back to sucking your brother cix dick incest

Casey is a woman.....

Surt has a mouthful of his brothers skeet

Ur a girl. Casey. Ur period dropped yet ho

You know, you could start a whole new thread about how he's a bitch or whatever, and leave my thread alone.

[Surt!fieD]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Votes dont lie and its 10 to 10. Go back to suckin treys dick unisex. Lmao

go back to sucking your brother cix dick incest

Casey is a woman.....

Surt has a mouthful of his brothers skeet

Ur a girl. Casey. Ur period dropped yet ho

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Average at best

I appreciate your opinion. Any pointers you could give me to improve my sound or lyrics? I like any feedback.

focus on bars, not punchlines. if the punch flows into it, then use it

So you mean to say that you think my punches are forced? You're probably right on that. I do a lot of setups just to get to a punch. I'll keep that in mind.

I used to worry much more about a message and multi schemes, but it seems like all people want nowadays is haymaker after haymaker. These verses were kind of my attempt at heavy punches. Some of them fall flat, others are really good. Maybe it's more about where I'm placing the punches or that I'm using too much filler in my setups?

[iamearlstone]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Average at best

I appreciate your opinion. Any pointers you could give me to improve my sound or lyrics? I like any feedback.

focus on bars, not punchlines. if the punch flows into it, then use it

[Tony Stanza]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Votes dont lie and its 10 to 10. Go back to suckin treys dick unisex. Lmao

go back to sucking your brother cix dick incest

Casey is a woman.....

Surt has a mouthful of his brothers skeet

[Surt!fieD]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Votes dont lie and its 10 to 10. Go back to suckin treys dick unisex. Lmao

go back to sucking your brother cix dick incest

Casey is a woman.....

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Faggots say they got my back but talking shit behind it
But my soul was Satan’s contract before I ticked and signed it
Lies and jealousy combined with fictitious consignment
Illuminates the image of a little bitch’s alignment
Mouths keep moving, the streets keep breathin’
Mamas lose they babies before they ever need teethin’
Them fuckboys fiendin’ while the jackboys creepin’
Leave a house bare like a deciduous mid-season
But analogies are boring, and metaphors are overplayed
Guntalk is easier than ever being in a sober state
Hold the ranks, Hip-hop feels old and rank
Same basic shit over the same folded bass
Same messages to the same populace
Same oppression for the same metropolis
It’s almost Kafkaesque or at best a Necropolis
We just boast about our ignorance and opulence

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

u sound like immortal technique on a shitt mic lol

surt a fucking poser and a pill popper that got bodied by me

so don't mind him

Okay. But, he gave me feedback. I don't know anything about your battle with him, but I would appreciate your input, as I do all.

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Rahu got skills, i wanna see him face off with [MENTION=18255]Minty[/MENTION]

JerzCity! Thanks man, I'm in and out of these forums, but I know from experience that you got plenty of writing skills.

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

You're def fit to battle, would like to see how you incorporate name-flips & wordplay, punches with a said opponent

Thanks! I've only locally battled in non-televised events. Stage fright probably plays a part in that.

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

Average at best

I appreciate your opinion. Any pointers you could give me to improve my sound or lyrics? I like any feedback.

[Rahu]

Re: Give me eyeballs.

u sound like immortal technique on a shitt mic lol

Oh shit man, thank you! That's a hell of a compliment for me. I love Immortal Technique and he is definitely an influence for me.