CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

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    RFP's Verse:

    Im just gunna start calling you "connect the dots" cuz none of your LINES CONNECTED YET/
    This battle, my bars are like condoms cuz they're gunna wrap "D" up LIKE PROTECTED SEX/

    dope opener solid punch and multies not forced dope shit here

    See I got those "HEFTY" bars, "GLAD" I could show you that you're "GARBAGE BAG" (hefty, glad, garbage bag..shut up pussy)
    So for ur TRASH WRITTENS im HAND GIVIN u constant ASS WHIPPINS like a HEARTLESS DAD/

    good associative wordplay in the begining and nameplay and punch solid line

    D, you're nothing but a HARMLESS FAGGOT the way my punches "air bag"
    you'd think a CAR IS CRASHIN/

    dope punchline

    LOL i aint even STARTED SPAZZIN, as soon as u STARTED RAPPIN i knew i was wasting shots on you like TARGET PRACTICE/

    good multis nice line

    I know you like multis, well this is how they're PROPERLY UTILIZED if I had any
    advice for you, it's PROBABLY SUICIDE/

    lol funny line

    There's HONESTLY TRUTH INSIDE, ALL OF THESE BRUTAL LINES so stop acting
    like ur God of multis before u get CRUCIFIED/

    multies flowed good personal allright line imo

    I wrote sum fucking bars so stop saying I'M DUCKING FAG you'd think D was suspended,
    hanging from my ceiling the way that I'M "PUNCHING BAG"/ (self explanatory)

    dope puncline name flip

    So to end this, Ima tell u ur pen game is AWFULLY BAD this was an easy kill D, thanks
    for the "BODY" "BAG"/ (pretty obvious)

    decent closer imo



    overall- 9/10 multies were solid punches and nameflips were too






    DBag's Verse:

    It's kind of ironic how you called me CONNECT THE DOTS.
    Cause you do the same thing when you INSPECT YOUR CROTCH.

    good rebuttle and good for an opener

    That's the result of having unprotected SEX A LOT.
    But you usually fail the test if you don't "CHECK THE BOX".

    ehhh not that dope imo fillerish to me

    Your "key-styles" don't qualify as writing EXTRA CLEAN SHIT.
    Plus you have a picture of a girl who's a MENTAL REJECT.

    another dull line punch isnt that hard or the joke isnt that funny

    You fall in love after a fuck, go get the WEDDING RING FIT.
    Petting zoo, I pull that tail like a SPECIAL NEEDS KID.

    lmao funny but the multie was kinda off once again

    I back up what I WRITE and I would FIGHT YOU IN A FLASH.
    Cause you make me wanna go PSYCHO like MICHAEL WITH A MASK.

    i feal u but its been done waaay too much

    A garbage bag scheme? One you RECYCLED FROM THE PAST?
    Which is ironic cause you can't really RECYCLE IF IT'S TRASH!

    haha dope little rebuttle multies are good too

    You always claim that your verses take ten MINUTES TO TYPE.
    An excuse you use if they don't like the SHIT THAT YOU WRITE.

    Personal.....hardest hitting line u wrote here

    Forgive me if I take time and like PRESENTING IT NICE.
    I guess effort is not something you ever DID IN YOUR LIFE.

    weak closer imo u got multies but not really a punch

    overall 6/10 u got multies just need to focus more on punches u flow good though for the most part


    vote goes to CallMeRFP good battle boys
    Sabotage Ent
    "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

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    • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

      thanks 4 the solid breakdown surt

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      • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

        Originally posted by RFP View Post
        shut up fag, i've cammed up several times for a minute here in tinychat, have numerous pics up, even took and posted a pic here just 4 u. I just dont want 2 give u the time of day. I would much rather do somethin productive with the time i have off rather then prepare a vid battle for you.


        Give it up, damn
        I'm better than you bro and that's what matters. Your verse only sounds good to people who don't know how to write. Homo.

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        • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

          Originally posted by DBag View Post
          I'm better than you bro and that's what matters. Your verse only sounds good to people who don't know how to write. Homo.

          what in the actual fuck.

          legit hope u die

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          • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

            good battle fellas
            Sabotage Ent
            "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

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            • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

              Originally posted by CallmeRFP View Post
              Originally posted by DBag View Post
              I'm better than you bro and i've never seen you that's what matters. Your verse only sounds good to people who don't know how to write. Homo.

              what in the actual fuck.

              legit hope u die
              That was uncalled for, and anybody who uses 4 instead of "for" is nobody to give a lesson on intelligence. Depending on where you're at, I'd probably be willing to battle you in person. Oh, by the way, sorry I called you a homo. That was honestly out of line.

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              • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                Ok that was literally one of the most dumb things I've ever read on here.

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                • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                  Originally posted by RFP View Post
                  Ok that was literally one of the most dumb things I've ever read on here.
                  If someone likes your verse better than mine, then that's their preference. But you said it yourself, I am a better rapper than you.

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                  • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                    Originally posted by Surt!fieD View Post
                    good battle fellas
                    Thanks Surt, appreciate the break down.

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                    • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                      I would NEVER battle in real life
                      As I've said before, I DON'T TAKE THIS SERIOUS I TEXT BATTLE TO KILL TIME AT WORK. My job and priorities come before something I honestly don't care about. WOW congratulations at you being a better "rapper" something I never claimed to be. See how far battling and composing music makes you, come on this forum and talk shit when you make it big.

                      Legit am done with this discussion holy fuck

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                      • Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                        Originally posted by RFP View Post
                        I would NEVER battle in real life
                        As I've said before, I DON'T TAKE THIS SERIOUS I TEXT BATTLE TO KILL TIME AT WORK. My job and priorities come before something I honestly don't care about. WOW congratulations at you being a better "rapper" something I never claimed to be. See how far battling and composing music makes you, ome on this forum and talk shit when you make it big.

                        Legit am done with this discussion holy fuck
                        At that point, ideally, I'd be too busy spending money, driving sports cars and stiff dicking your relatives... Including pets... Dogs, cats, chinchillas, gold fish etc.

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