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  • CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

    Here you go faggot, sum quick written, well constructed bars.

    RFP's Verse:

    Im just gunna start calling you "connect the dots" cuz none of your LINES CONNECTED YET
    This battle, my bars are like condoms cuz they're gunna wrap "D" up LIKE PROTECTED SEX/

    See I got those "HEFTY" bars, "GLAD" I could show you that you're "GARBAGE BAG" (hefty, glad, garbage bag..shut up pussy)
    So for ur TRASH WRITTENS im HAND GIVIN u constant ASS WHIPPINS like a HEARTLESS DAD/

    D, you're nothing but a HARMLESS FAGGOT the way my punches "air bag"
    you'd think a CAR IS CRASHIN/

    LOL i aint even STARTED SPAZZIN, as soon as u STARTED RAPPIN i knew i was wasting shots on you like TARGET PRACTICE/

    I know you like multis, well this is how they're PROPERLY UTILIZED if I had any
    advice for you, it's PROBABLY SUICIDE/

    There's HONESTLY TRUTH INSIDE, ALL OF THESE BRUTAL LINES so stop acting
    like ur God of multis before u get CRUCIFIED/

    I wrote sum fucking bars so stop saying I'M DUCKING FAG you'd think D was suspended,
    hanging from my ceiling the way that I'M "PUNCHING BAG"/ (self explanatory)

    So to end this shit, Ima tell u ur pen game is AWFULLY BAD this was an easy kill D, thanks
    for the "BODY" "BAG"/ (pretty obvious)



    I typed this up in literally 10 minutes, u can't fuck wit me
    Now leave me alone fag boy






    DBag's Verse:

    It's kind of ironic how you called me CONNECT THE DOTS.
    Cause you do the same thing when you INSPECT YOUR CROTCH.

    That's the result of having unprotected SEX A LOT.
    But you usually fail the test if you don't "CHECK THE BOX".

    Your "key-styles" don't qualify as writing EXTRA CLEAN SHIT.
    Plus you have a picture of a girl who's a MENTAL REJECT.

    You fall in love after a fuck, go get the WEDDING RING FIT.
    Petting zoo, I pull that tail like a SPECIAL NEEDS KID.

    I back up what I WRITE and I would FIGHT YOU IN A FLASH.
    Cause you make me wanna go PSYCHO like MICHAEL WITH A MASK.

    A garbage bag scheme? One you RECYCLED FROM THE PAST?
    Which is ironic cause you can't really RECYCLE IF IT'S TRASH!

    You always claim that your verses take ten MINUTES TO TYPE.
    An excuse you use if they don't like the SHIT THAT YOU WRITE.

    Forgive me if I take time and like PRESENTING IT NICE.
    I guess effort is not something you ever DID IN YOUR LIFE.
    9
    RFP
    77.78%
    7
    DBag
    22.22%
    2

    The poll is expired.



  • #2
    Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

    watch him take a week to try and rebuttal all my shit

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    • #3
      Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

      Pretty dope RFP, i see you nigga

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      • #4
        Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

        this is light work, but good looks

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        • #5
          Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

          Ten minutes, man, smh, that's insane. Props.

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          • #6
            Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

            Originally posted by symbol View Post
            Ten minutes, man, smh, that's insane. Props.
            thanks sym, might of been a lil longer but I wasted no time, see how long it takes dfag to respond to these "moist" bars

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            • #7
              Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

              Moist, haha, what a word to describe someone's pen game.

              He's gonna need a good verse to beat that. We'll just have to wait and see.

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              • #8
                Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                @Surt!fieD

                wedding ring fit/ special needs kids, you seein this?
                he's bitin you

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                • #9
                  Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                  Originally posted by CallmeRFP View Post
                  [MENTION=15975]Surt!fieD[/MENTION]
                  wedding ring fit/ special needs kids, you seein this?
                  he's bitin you
                  Damn man, you always have an excuse for something... The only thing me and Surt have in common is that were both better than you.

                  And to Surt, if you wrote something similar, I never saw it, that's my word.

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                  • #10
                    Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                    Originally posted by DBag View Post
                    Originally posted by CallmeRFP View Post
                    @Surt!fieD
                    wedding ring fit/ special needs kids, you seein this?
                    he's bitin you
                    Damn man, you always have an excuse for something... The only thing me and Surt have in common is that were both better than you.

                    And to Surt, if you wrote something similar, I never saw it, that's my word.
                    Originally posted by DBag View Post
                    Originally posted by Luca Bonaducci View Post
                    Originally posted by DBag View Post
                    I vote Surt on this one. Cleaner verses, pretty good use of multies, and just a better overall structure. Luca had some nice punches tho. Two 45's/quarter to three, ghost this buster/no proton pack.

                    Good battle.

                    No poll tho?
                    when people know how to vote on a battle i'll add a poll

                    I write my verse in bar form he uses run on sentences with caps lock

                    okay you don't know good structure

                    good use of multies? clever eat shit rhymes with special needs kid?

                    okay you don't know multies

                    I have nice punchlines

                    well you do know bars

                    Bars over Bullshit
                    Actually, you don't write your verses in bar format. It's a sloppy jumbled-together poor excuse for a paragraph.

                    Clever eat shit/special needs kid, is a multi-syllabic rhyme. It's not an exact rhyme, but Eminem and every other rapper does the same shit.

                    I do know bars. It's the way in which all songs are written. And yes, you have punch lines, they're just amateur ones.

                    I was trying to give you credit man. You should be happy for that, cause everyones saying you got bodied.




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                    • #11
                      Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                      u lying so bad bro


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                      • #12
                        Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                        I've got DBag in a very unexpected victory, haha

                        EDIT: Here's a bit more detail so Luca doesn't attack me :)

                        the battle was unfair, for a start. DBag had a massive advantage, but Call gave him this advantage on purpose so it's hardly worth mentioning.

                        CallmeRFP came with some good shit, considering it took him about 10 mins to write. His multies were good, but some of the lines were ehh, which really let down an overall good verse. Could've taken my vote with stronger punches.

                        DBag came with a clean flip, which was smooth and funny, then his flow was just far more polished. What he lacked in punches, he made up for in direct personals.

                        No bodybag, but a W for the douche-meister

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                        • #13
                          Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                          Originally posted by CallmeRFP View Post
                          u lying so bad bro

                          I said wedding ring fit/special needs kid. He said clever eat shit/special needs kid.

                          How many battlers use the same head blue up/marge simpson scheme?



                          All bias a side, from an outside perspective, my verse is cleaner than yours in every way possible. Record your faggot face on camera and I swear on EVERYTHING I will bury you. Period.

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                          • #14
                            Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                            Call, I think you have a life-long enemy in this dude, for real, haha

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                            • #15
                              Re: CallmeRFP vs DBag (Official)

                              why u wanna see my "faggot" face so bad?




                              leavin my buddies store now, ill take a pic and prove ur a "mark"

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