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  • Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

    Here are all 3 rounds, from both Trey and I. The rules were 3 rounds, 4 bars a piece.


    ROUND 1 ON BAG.


    You're an idiot that went and chose a name like Trey Deuce.
    Not knowing that it rhymed with gay dudes and Jaze Juce.

    I'm amazed you didn't see it, suppose you're borderline retarded.
    You're that sorta guy, we roll our eyes, cause most your lines are garbage.

    Your assignment isn't rap. I'm a spank this little fucker.
    Now he's crying cause he's trash... BABY IN A DUMPSTER!

    I'm amazed your asian mother went to pay a train of brothers to not play it safe with rubbers and she also paid a gay to fuck her.


    ROUND 1 on TREY.


    Now this mans shit,
    DB left me pissed,
    so I split this DB like Crabtree on my way to six..

    TOUCHDOWN.. SCORES,
    His bitch is on my dick,
    I got his Dime in the Bag,
    Like I'm pushin on some piff..

    I got bars, no punches..
    Kidding i got punches like Tyson when he was 20 something,
    I bite your ear off faggot just for nothing,
    date ya lil sister, cook thanksgiving dinner,
    and use your insides as the stuffing...
    My flow ain't sick it's just disgusting..

    I got this Douchè in a bag, it's clear now..
    Young boi ain't prepared for 3 rounds..

    TREY motha fucking DEUCE


    ROUND 2 ON BAG.


    Look at me, look at you. You can't EXPECT TO BE A MATCH.
    I OFFENSIVELY ATTACK with the COMPLEXITY OF RAP.

    I'm a PROPHET WITH THESE WORDS, YOU NEED A CENTURY TO GRASP.
    Even GOD WANTS YOU TO LEARN and I was SENT TO BEAT YOUR ASS.

    First lesson, hear me out, give my OPINIONS A TRY.
    Stop forcing punches and improve from single SYLLABLE RHYMES.

    First I thought it was the trash you had WRITTEN INSIDE.
    But then I noticed it was built on a SIMPLISTIC DESIGN


    ROUND 2 ON TREY.


    I be snappin like.. I HATE YOU LUX.. I HATE YOU LUX..

    No matter what Dbag types it's not enough,
    got his boys in the back like he fucking you up,
    his girl givin me the eyes like she down to fuck..
    so I put my D in her box, it was just another body BAG cuz..

    I said umm

    an yea my name rhymes wit jaze juice and gay dudes,
    if you a basic writer, let me show you Dbag how to spit some fire.

    If he say he ain't got it,
    I drop him and go in D,Bag,
    No hands just a kick in D's bag,
    His girl screaming calling me a D bag,
    After I finished whipping D's ass,
    His girl at my crib rubbing on a G's BAG...

    Just cause it sounds intelligent doesn't mean that it's nice..

    You be spitting all complex and Lux like,
    but what you spitting ain't shedding no light,
    the shits different the gaps missing, you just ain't fillin it right,
    your lost, this the wrong path to be traveling on,
    and that Lux shit's played out, and that's why he lost..


    ROUND 3 ON BAG (CallMeRFP started talking some shit, so I did some research).


    First off, CallMeRFP, you're EXCITED AS SHIT.
    When TRE SPITS, you come ALIVE and start RIDING HIS DICK.

    I'm not TRYING TO BITCH, but y'all some LAME ASS VIRGINS
    Faggot minds think a like, probably the SAME DAMN PERSON

    Just to MAKE THAT CERTAIN, I checked your GRIMY ASSES.
    And notice y'all post from the same I.P. ADDRESS

    It's WEIRD AS FUCK, cause Tre CLEARLY SUCKS!
    But CallMe's always there to suck his dick and CHEER HIM UP!

    This rap shit... I understand, and got it DOWN TO A SCIENCE.
    You suck, and compensate by getting LOUD WHEN YOU'RE RHYMING.
    No one taught you about bars, or how to COUNT THEM WITH TIMING.
    You give it your best, but still don't SOUND LIKE YOU'RE TRYING!!

    Your retard raps, are a REFLECTION OF MY FIRST EFFORTS.
    But you suck, and that's a DEEP REFERENCE TO YOUR WORK ETHIC.
    I pity you Trey, there's no QUESTION YOU DESERVE LESSONS
    A FIRM LEFT WILL knock you HIRE than the WIRE where BIRDS REST AT.

    in closing...

    CallMe and Trey are some LAME ASS VIRGINS
    Don't matter if they fuck, they're the SAME DAMN PERSON.


    ROUND 3 on Trey.


    Homie...

    You gotta work on your ability's,
    start crafting more vividly,
    That shit.. Ain't hittin specifically,
    It's pre written trash with a lack of delivery..

    I ain't gotta waist my gold bars on this trash that's beneath me,
    I got shit crafted so deeply and besides,
    I get challenged by Dbag's weekly..
    (That's you OTBVA) lmaoo

    Now see, grimey asses and I.P. adress does not rhyme..
    stop 5.. You is not slime..
    It's all the same shit why lie,
    he screamin YOU GON GET THIS WORK..
    But he need to be screamin IMMA NEED SOME HELP,
    cause that garbage style you created needs to stay up on the shelf!

    Imma show you how to really write..

    I pity you trey, I live in the city of K's theres no QUESTION YOU DESERVE LESSONS,
    but imma cook em right like bobby flay,
    A FIRM LEFT WILL knock you HIRE than the WIRE where the birds REST'N,
    this right put you out of commission for 2 weeks.. Like a yeast INFECTION

    TREY mothafucking DEUCE...
    __________________
    ~#FUCK12~


    DECIDE THE WINNER!
    3
    Trey Deuce
    0.00%
    0
    DBag
    100.00%
    3

    The poll is expired.


  • #2
    Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

    Lmao multies on point
    Sabotage Ent
    "you would probably rhyme rhyming with rhyming"

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    • #3
      Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

      Where you at deuce?

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      • #4
        Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

        Now this mans shit,
        DB left me pissed,
        so I split this DB like Crabtree on my way to six..

        TOUCHDOWN.. SCORES,
        His bitch is on my dick,
        I got his Dime in the Bag,
        Like I'm pushin on some piff..

        I got bars, no punches..
        Kidding i got punches like Tyson when he was 20 something,
        I bite your ear off faggot just for nothing,
        date ya lil sister, cook thanksgiving dinner,
        and use your insides as the stuffing...
        My flow ain't sick it's just disgusting..

        I got this Douchè in a bag, it's clear now..
        Young boi ain't prepared for 3 rounds..

        TREY motha fucking DEUCE
        ~#FUCK12~

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        • #5
          Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

          Oh shit, 2nd round on DBag, let's get it

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          • #6
            Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

            ROUND 2!

            Look at me, look at you. You can't EXPECT TO BE A MATCH.
            I OFFENSIVELY ATTACK with the COMPLEXITY OF RAP.

            I'm a PROPHET WITH THESE WORDS, YOU NEED A CENTURY TO GRASP.
            Even GOD WANTS YOU TO LEARN and I was SENT TO BEAT YOUR ASS.

            First lesson, hear me out, give my OPINIONS A TRY.
            Stop forcing punches and improve from single SYLLABLE RHYMES.

            First I thought it was the trash you had WRITTEN INSIDE.
            But then I noticed it was built on a SIMPLISTIC DESIGN

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            • #7
              Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

              no rebuttals...? Fuck it, this a fight. Bottom o' round 2, Trey, it's on you, my nigga

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              • #8
                Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

                Originally posted by symbol View Post
                no rebuttals...? Fuck it, this a fight. Bottom o' round 2, Trey, it's on you, my nigga
                I rebuttaled by calling out his use of single syllables.

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                • #9
                  Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

                  Oh, I see. Felt more like a personal but cool, cool.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

                    Originally posted by symbol View Post
                    Oh, I see. Felt more like a personal but cool, cool.
                    I can see that. I'll try to be more specific next round!

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                    • #11
                      Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

                      this saddens me

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                      • #12
                        Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!


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                        • #13
                          Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

                          Originally posted by CallmeRFP View Post
                          this saddens me
                          You must be a very sensitive man.

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                          • #14
                            Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

                            try passionate



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                            • #15
                              Re: Calling out Trey Deuce (Deuce vs. DBag)!

                              Originally posted by CallmeRFP View Post
                              try passionate


                              Haha, nice annotation. Fair enough.

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