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  • Got Coz to change the way he writes
    You can't get my wavelength Coz you ain't got the sight
    I’m just
    chillin, glow in ultraviolet, While most claim to be ultra violent

    Talking about Mendeleev’s apex gets you ate next
    Making future predictions based on our written properties
    Sophocles? I aim to please, writing for me was your tragedy
    Make you rip off your sleeves in agony, i’m Euripides
    Remedy that inner disease, with the fire in these...lines
    These spines, have an escalating list of DNA
    The tragedy of man, I feel like Aeschylus today
    Just had to cover the three sides equally, the Trinity

    My thoughts are timeless, not spineless
    I’m Trying to vicariously live through every iris that I vs
    So I can mine any thought process that might be more diverse
    But before I find it It’s more likely that I’ll die first
    Nerds like you’d probably roll the die first
    Mr. Roleplay, what persona should I display today behind my throwaway
    In the process, turned your life into a throwaway


    You have a place for this beast?
    Don't get lost or I feast
    In it for the science, this is just a lab I rent
    You’re stuck in the Minotaur's Labyrinth, and you sir are not from Nazareth
    Watch where you step I'm Imhotep, the architect of the art you rec
    If you bust a rhyme, we break your neck

    This is just us
    Why did you have to bring in Justice?
    You sound like a paranoid illegal talking about
    just ice
    In need of some acknowledgment?
    Sounds like sustenance for a suspect prince

    You tried to throw me off with that SSA
    Like you wild’n, Miley Cyrus in the USA
    In reality, you’re a misspelled virus stuck in the UK
    Since i’m reppin 47 today’s your DOOMSDAY

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    • Put a split in your head and leave it leakin like a fresh orgasm.

      My dick leave that pussy flesh a mess n give ur whore spasms.

      I whip out the techs and splash em

      I'll make rock disappear if he talking about nazareth

      What the fuck do u know about lazarus?

      Talkin shit like that is hazardous

      The shit I say is the absurdist

      I met a bitch so bad I was nervous

      Then I got laid thanks to a cab service.


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      • Word bitch// What's with the history lessons// this shit is depressing// ya bitch I be pressing// my dick she be blessing//
        don't get NERVOUS// or I'm lifting the weapon// you'll get split with the Stetson// go get you a reverend// that's ABSURD shit// when i pull up to ya crib,, CAB SERVICE// macks bursting// I'm tryna black hearse shit// I flipped ya best shit now it's my worst shit// on purpose // raw verses// no rehearsing // I be working// i be lurking //

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        • mrbrillz


          Word advice: It's easier to read raps from others if each line break goes down instead of writing it from left - ALL the way to the right
          I like modding because it gives me the illusion I have control.

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          • Word bitch//

            What's with the history lessons//
            this shit is depressing//
            ya bitch I be pressing//
            my dick she be blessing//

            don't get NERVOUS//
            or I'm lifting the weapon//
            you'll get split with the Stetson//
            go get you a reverend//

            that's ABSURD shit//
            when i pull up to ya crib,, CAB SERVICE//
            macks bursting//
            I'm tryna black hearse shit//
            I flipped ya best shit now it's my worst shit//
            on purpose //
            raw verses//
            no rehearsing //
            I be working//
            i be lurking //...


            and I cut it short ...


            Justice

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              • Yikes justice got snapped on badly

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                • Will justice ever recover?

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                  • I'd whoop everyone's ass in here throughout there entire home with nothing but my feet, that's a roundhouse kick?














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                    • Originally posted by RockyfifteeNo View Post
                      Got Coz to change the way he writes
                      You can't get my wavelength Coz you ain't got the sight
                      I’m just
                      chillin, glow in ultraviolet, While most claim to be ultra violent

                      Talking about Mendeleev’s apex gets you ate next
                      Making future predictions based on our written properties
                      Sophocles? I aim to please, writing for me was your tragedy
                      Make you rip off your sleeves in agony, i’m Euripides
                      Remedy that inner disease, with the fire in these...lines
                      These spines, have an escalating list of DNA
                      The tragedy of man, I feel like Aeschylus today
                      Just had to cover the three sides equally, the Trinity

                      My thoughts are timeless, not spineless
                      I’m Trying to vicariously live through every iris that I vs
                      So I can mine any thought process that might be more diverse
                      But before I find it It’s more likely that I’ll die first
                      Nerds like you’d probably roll the die first
                      Mr. Roleplay, what persona should I display today behind my throwaway
                      In the process, turned your life into a throwaway


                      You have a place for this beast?
                      Don't get lost or I feast
                      In it for the science, this is just a lab I rent
                      You’re stuck in the Minotaur's Labyrinth, and you sir are not from Nazareth
                      Watch where you step I'm Imhotep, the architect of the art you rec
                      If you bust a rhyme, we break your neck

                      This is just us
                      Why did you have to bring in Justice?
                      You sound like a paranoid illegal talking about
                      just ice
                      In need of some acknowledgment?
                      Sounds like sustenance for a suspect prince

                      You tried to throw me off with that SSA
                      Like you wild’n, Miley Cyrus in the USA
                      In reality, you’re a misspelled virus stuck in the UK
                      Since i’m reppin 47 today’s your DOOMSDAY
                      Talkin bout predicting the future? just stop it.
                      On this site you’d make a worse prophet than Wat did.

                      Your DNA bar.. wasn’t legit.
                      I’ll show what I’m made of like Watson and Crick.

                      I’m a misspelled virus stuck in the uk? it’s true.
                      Well, I mean, it was, but I flew.

                      Phew.

                      He’s chattin bout a labyrinth. I wonder why he added it.
                      About to be a House Of Leaves; he stuck in random passages.

                      A Minotaur’s labyrinth..? yes it’s the same system.
                      Just cut the bull; you use this thread for escapism.

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                      • Originally posted by Virbius View Post

                        Talkin bout predicting the future? just stop it.
                        On this site you’d make a worse prophet than Wat did.

                        Your DNA bar.. wasn’t legit.
                        I’ll show what I’m made of like Watson and Crick.

                        I’m a misspelled virus stuck in the uk? it’s true.
                        Well, I mean, it was, but I flew.

                        Phew.

                        He’s chattin bout a labyrinth. I wonder why he added it.
                        About to be a House Of Leaves; he stuck in random passages.

                        A Minotaur’s labyrinth..? yes it’s the same system.
                        Just cut the bull; you use this thread for escapism.
                        Virbius//
                        I'm impervious//
                        to the verbs u spit//
                        u soft as furby shit//
                        X ya history when I curb ya jibs//
                        ya words don't hit//
                        cuz layman's gotta research the shit//
                        it don't mean you nice nigga just cuz your words are big//
                        that's ABSURD as shit//
                        you bird ass bitch//
                        you'll get smoked like herb bag quick//
                        U dead after the last verse I spit//

                        on the other forum//
                        wit the 4 barz but your rebuttals boring//
                        I flash the muzzle on em//
                        it shut em up like muzzle on em//
                        50 pc like a puzzle on em//
                        complex how I puzzle all em//

                        and u skipped my bars to rebuttal rocky//
                        u scared all of a sudden prolly//
                        I know I'm fucking cocky//
                        I'm high off puffing broccoli//

                        mixed wit corn liquor//
                        I was born sicker//
                        then u simple boring niggas//
                        read Wikipedia and start flowing niggas//
                        who promote you niggas//
                        for black history month Imma choke u niggas//
                        like Jesus when he was nailed to the cross imma poke u niggas//
                        walk up soft spoken//
                        start locing//
                        then smoke u niggas//
                        RIP now quote this nigga//....






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                        • Originally posted by Virbius View Post

                          Talkin bout predicting the future? just stop it.
                          On this site you’d make a worse prophet than Wat did.

                          Your DNA bar.. wasn’t legit.
                          I’ll show what I’m made of like Watson and Crick.

                          I’m a misspelled virus stuck in the uk? it’s true.
                          Well, I mean, it was, but I flew.

                          Phew.

                          He’s chattin bout a labyrinth. I wonder why he added it.
                          About to be a House Of Leaves; he stuck in random passages.

                          A Minotaur’s labyrinth..? yes it’s the same system.
                          Just cut the bull; you use this thread for escapism.


                          To be honest that wasn't much of a rebuttal
                          Was half assed like a side cuddle
                          Only had a couple exceptions to what i said apparently
                          So now it is apparent to me, i am a parent to the
                          Though i don't consider you to be a full on parody
                          You should still recognize this form of rarity

                          With this pen many men I've left lying in gore
                          Hence, using the image of the Minotaur
                          You said you put a beast in its place, taxonomy
                          I just wanted to play off the placement, and show you the basement
                          So you could admire my bone colony economy
                          Clearly(Goodz voice) there's no calm in me

                          As far as the bull set up, you bit that from my post in the 4 bar thread
                          I feel like rick grimes, walking amongst the dead
                          What happened to original thought?
                          I guess it got bought, when the site switched hands from Wat

                          As far as escapism goes i guess I'm Houdini
                          Pulling structures out of thin air like Aladdin's genie


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                          • I should recognise your form of rarity? truespeak.
                            But consider my original thought was: you neek.

                            You said “Aladdin’s genie”.. true honest brilliance!
                            You allude to the rumour you blew Robin Williams.
                            Real subtle.

                            I’d put you in a box.. “Houdini”?
                            You hopped in the box yourself. too easy.
                            I quite like the guy, this is only a rap ting..
                            But I’ll Houdini his soul from the body it’s trapped in.

                            If I did bite “Rick Grimes” would switch sides like I do when it comes on tv coz that shit’s dry.

                            And no I didn’t bite your bull, that’s a snake’s curse.
                            Wait, we independently came up with the same words? that’s way worse!
                            Fuckin shoot me now, I mean..

                            Hold up.
                            We both used ‘bull’ to mean bullshit.
                            If you think that’s biting go bite on a fullclip.

                            Said your pen’s killed?
                            Never said you’re pen skilled.
                            You just take a stab at it and then chill.
                            Your pen couldn’t kill shit

                            ..except Brillz.

                            I jacked Justice’s gavel, bashed Rocky to gravel,
                            Skipped Brillz shit coz he babbles in battles.

                            Why should I bring “original thought”? you don’t flip that shit, you just strip and distort.
                            What happened to your mother’s “original thought” when she changed her mind and didn’t abort?

                            A parody?
                            You mad at me?

                            The crowd’s crying ‘type it again!’,
                            I’m like.. nah.
                            So they say ‘copy and paste then?’
                            I’m like.. hah!

                            You said “admire my bone colony economy”..
                            You bit that from..
                            Just playin. nobody’s said that before. ever.
                            And for good reason.

                            Eight trillion people have lived on this earth..
                            And avoided putting that shit in a verse.
                            Of all those people.. you had to be first?
                            There’s “original thought” and the matter of worth.

                            For fuck’s sake.

                            Rocky.. coz he takes a beating on purpose?
                            Plans to switch stance in the final round and come hurt us?
                            Wow. now I’m nervous.
                            I’d better back off, I ain’t finna get murdered.

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                            • LMAO GAWD DAAAAAAMN


                              Ms. Brillo Pad just got killed in the crossfire !!!
                              I like modding because it gives me the illusion I have control.

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                              • Originally posted by Virbius View Post
                                I should recognise your form of rarity? truespeak.
                                But consider my original thought was: you neek.

                                You said “Aladdin’s genie”.. true honest brilliance!
                                You allude to the rumour you blew Robin Williams.
                                Real subtle.

                                I’d put you in a box.. “Houdini”?
                                You hopped in the box yourself. too easy.
                                I quite like the guy, this is only a rap ting..
                                But I’ll Houdini his soul from the body it’s trapped in.

                                If I did bite “Rick Grimes” would switch sides like I do when it comes on tv coz that shit’s dry.

                                And no I didn’t bite your bull, that’s a snake’s curse.
                                Wait, we independently came up with the same words? that’s way worse!
                                Fuckin shoot me now, I mean..

                                Hold up.
                                We both used ‘bull’ to mean bullshit.
                                If you think that’s biting go bite on a fullclip.

                                Said your pen’s killed?
                                Never said you’re pen skilled.
                                You just take a stab at it and then chill.
                                Your pen couldn’t kill shit

                                ..except Brillz.

                                I jacked Justice’s gavel, bashed Rocky to gravel,
                                Skipped Brillz shit coz he babbles in battles.

                                Why should I bring “original thought”? you don’t flip that shit, you just strip and distort.
                                What happened to your mother’s “original thought” when she changed her mind and didn’t abort?

                                A parody?
                                You mad at me?

                                The crowd’s crying ‘type it again!’,
                                I’m like.. nah.
                                So they say ‘copy and paste then?’
                                I’m like.. hah!

                                You said “admire my bone colony economy”..
                                You bit that from..
                                Just playin. nobody’s said that before. ever.
                                And for good reason.

                                Eight trillion people have lived on this earth..
                                And avoided putting that shit in a verse.
                                Of all those people.. you had to be first?
                                There’s “original thought” and the matter of worth.

                                For fuck’s sake.

                                Rocky.. coz he takes a beating on purpose?
                                Plans to switch stance in the final round and come hurt us?
                                Wow. now I’m nervous.
                                I’d better back off, I ain’t finna get murdered.


                                this face of steel will steal your faith for real
                                reel in anything you desire with relativity
                                relatively speaking, like a cartoonist they're drawn in
                                fawning, over the crown i possess
                                try to contest, i use police interrogation
                                it's the only relevant con test

                                i jumped up to the box for my own amusement
                                like studying mythology to understand what a muse meant
                                you have to read between the line
                                while in my prime, im stuck in the middle of time

                                speaking of time that bull line was just too soon
                                But i guess you could claim it to be natural like a monsoon
                                i guess repetition is inevitable
                                so i turned oracle to get ahead of the bull
                                Pagans paint me with the head of a bull

                                Precision sight periscope when i spy
                                On point with this joint turned red bullseye
                                bone colony economy has some real policy
                                paints the picture of the crypt for this crip

                                i live life like a dawg, i’m colorblind
                                everything is black and white like columbine
                                That part of mind, no pardon me
                                That part of me is actually caught up in duality
                                Duel those that question actuality

                                I realize the gray to combat mental atrophy
                                That’s worthy of a trophy if you’re asking me
                                Thinking like that in the modern day
                                Turns you into a powerhouse like Mater Dei

                                No need to mask it, see i can part it
                                Living like Moses leading the droves is my destiny
                                You just glimpsed the light, dis’ bit be tiny
                                Don't mind me
                                These days my mind be so irie

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