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  • Karate Adult
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    Will justice ever recover?

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  • Chaunce
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    Yikes justice got snapped on badly

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  • Robin Williams
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  • mrbrillz
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    Word bitch//

    What's with the history lessons//
    this shit is depressing//
    ya bitch I be pressing//
    my dick she be blessing//

    don't get NERVOUS//
    or I'm lifting the weapon//
    you'll get split with the Stetson//
    go get you a reverend//

    that's ABSURD shit//
    when i pull up to ya crib,, CAB SERVICE//
    macks bursting//
    I'm tryna black hearse shit//
    I flipped ya best shit now it's my worst shit//
    on purpose //
    raw verses//
    no rehearsing //
    I be working//
    i be lurking //...


    and I cut it short ...


    Justice

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  • Justice
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    mrbrillz


    Word advice: It's easier to read raps from others if each line break goes down instead of writing it from left - ALL the way to the right

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  • mrbrillz
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    Word bitch// What's with the history lessons// this shit is depressing// ya bitch I be pressing// my dick she be blessing//
    don't get NERVOUS// or I'm lifting the weapon// you'll get split with the Stetson// go get you a reverend// that's ABSURD shit// when i pull up to ya crib,, CAB SERVICE// macks bursting// I'm tryna black hearse shit// I flipped ya best shit now it's my worst shit// on purpose // raw verses// no rehearsing // I be working// i be lurking //

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  • Robin Williams
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    Put a split in your head and leave it leakin like a fresh orgasm.

    My dick leave that pussy flesh a mess n give ur whore spasms.

    I whip out the techs and splash em

    I'll make rock disappear if he talking about nazareth

    What the fuck do u know about lazarus?

    Talkin shit like that is hazardous

    The shit I say is the absurdist

    I met a bitch so bad I was nervous

    Then I got laid thanks to a cab service.


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  • RockyfifteeNo
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    Got Coz to change the way he writes
    You can't get my wavelength Coz you ain't got the sight
    I’m just
    chillin, glow in ultraviolet, While most claim to be ultra violent

    Talking about Mendeleev’s apex gets you ate next
    Making future predictions based on our written properties
    Sophocles? I aim to please, writing for me was your tragedy
    Make you rip off your sleeves in agony, i’m Euripides
    Remedy that inner disease, with the fire in these...lines
    These spines, have an escalating list of DNA
    The tragedy of man, I feel like Aeschylus today
    Just had to cover the three sides equally, the Trinity

    My thoughts are timeless, not spineless
    I’m Trying to vicariously live through every iris that I vs
    So I can mine any thought process that might be more diverse
    But before I find it It’s more likely that I’ll die first
    Nerds like you’d probably roll the die first
    Mr. Roleplay, what persona should I display today behind my throwaway
    In the process, turned your life into a throwaway


    You have a place for this beast?
    Don't get lost or I feast
    In it for the science, this is just a lab I rent
    You’re stuck in the Minotaur's Labyrinth, and you sir are not from Nazareth
    Watch where you step I'm Imhotep, the architect of the art you rec
    If you bust a rhyme, we break your neck

    This is just us
    Why did you have to bring in Justice?
    You sound like a paranoid illegal talking about
    just ice
    In need of some acknowledgment?
    Sounds like sustenance for a suspect prince

    You tried to throw me off with that SSA
    Like you wild’n, Miley Cyrus in the USA
    In reality, you’re a misspelled virus stuck in the UK
    Since i’m reppin 47 today’s your DOOMSDAY

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  • Virbius
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    Hey Rocky..

    I’mma teach you a lesson for trying to act scholarly.
    Like that old fart Justice back when he smacked Sophocles.
    I put beasts in their place, so you know attacks honour me.
    Put beasts in their place, so, you know? a taxonomy.

    Heard you can win a muffin from Justice if you guess his age best.
    Your lines are light, not bright, I ain’t get your wavelength.
    If I’m “stepping to the table” this is Mendeleev’s mental apex;
    I’m putting everything in a box, that can get arranged next.

    Now I know it ain’t gangsta to reference chemistry in battle rhymes.
    But you belong at the bottom of the group, and you act denied.

    Like, actinides, at the bottom of the periodi.. too much?

    Oh you’re a “suck a dick” rapper? learn to duck a sick rapper. that’s a spoonerism.
    You mention “Red Devils” then start throwing salt. that’s a superstition.
    “The life I live is a fable”? better found a new religion based on true precision, shrewd derision and a ruthless mission.
    But to pursue the vision I even made Justice calmer(/karma) like Buddha’s system.

    “Living ass backwards”? I’d have put that shit a better way.
    Youre ‘living ASS backwards’ by relying on the SSA.
    Hey..

    The only “Masters” I believe in.. ancient aliens.
    “Broken wrist” is so legit; I devastate the radius.

    “On acid like Ellis” yeah, the art’s acknowledged, and the bars are honest..
    But they aren’t astonished til I’m taking acid in the club like Arthur Collins.

    Your lore’s cool, but you can’t pass bars like these.
    The only letters you’ll get after your name are RIP.

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  • Justice
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    Rocky just went into maximum overdrive !!!

    Will Herb-B-Us ever be able to recover from such a devastating onslaught ???!!!

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  • RockyfifteeNo
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    Originally posted by Virbius View Post
    Is this Enemy of the State now how Brill’s shit got you running round and buggin out like you Will Smith?
    You can’t write a skilled flip. could fight a female human statue and still miss.
    You know, a still miss, coz.. nah, just playin.

    You coulda said.. maybe.. about how a brill’s a type of lil’ fish.
    And then, like, taken a knife to his side, give him gill slits.
    You couldn’t even beat me with our skills switched..
    Coz if I wrote like you I’d just chill, quit.

    Quit this quick kid, scrap your bars.
    ASAP, Rocky. At. Long. Last.

    He gets bare stares when Rocky’s training.
    He’ll be bruised blue and red, I ain’t body painting.
    He ain’t give a shit about hiphop, his hobby’s hating.
    He Rocky road soft with a chocolate glazing.
    Sweet. so sweet that I bet he got full dimples.
    Uh if this is Rocky I guess Moose must be Bullwinkle.
    You couldn’t get ahead on a thread with a wool spindle.
    I’ve, uh, covered more points than a good thimble.
    It looks simple. logic. stop it, you lost this.
    You lost a lot on this site, on some Watt shit.

    That’s some current events.
    Coz uh, watts and current, like elec.. fine, forget it.

    Talking tough behind a throwaway
    Go away

    This is pure vibration to any stone, the earth be quaking, even philosophers can't condone

    Family got blessed by the female statue at Ellis Island
    Are you on acid? like Ellis Wilin?

    In other words, You ain't got no hits

    If you quit, then I’d win……….

    The breeze is blowing from the back at a high wind
    At Godspeed, it's all about energy
    they said you were a model person until you burned in effigy
    I guess it was meant to be, I'm sorry you challenged destiny
    the fate of hubris

    Tiny Tim broke his wrist, trying to prove his ground stepping to the table
    The life you live is a fable
    Hallucinations against a blank canvas
    shouting to get your point across, but no one listens

    Now you're trying to act cross
    When you’re a model citizen like Kate Moss
    And about as manly too

    I'm an ageless wonder like Manu
    Hard work will be immortalized and this man knew
    You sold out to the red Devil like Man U
    If you’re looking for someone to blame, that man’s you

    If you turn blue you’re dead, America
    No flags needed Coz, repping the color of your Masters
    It’s time for an education, go get your masters
    Living backwards ass, Coz Dixiecrats
    You Might as well suck a dick and call yourself a Dixie Chick

    I want my end to mirror your’s, I don't want to catch stage fright
    I need a little sunny Delight, so I too can bite Daylyt


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  • Virbius
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    Is this Enemy of the State now how Brill’s shit got you running round and buggin out like you Will Smith?
    You can’t write a skilled flip. could fight a female human statue and still miss.
    You know, a still miss, coz.. nah, just playin.

    You coulda said.. maybe.. about how a brill’s a type of lil’ fish.
    And then, like, taken a knife to his side, give him gill slits.
    You couldn’t even beat me with our skills switched..
    Coz if I wrote like you I’d just chill, quit.

    Quit this quick kid, scrap your bars.
    ASAP, Rocky. At. Long. Last.

    He gets bare stares when Rocky’s training.
    He’ll be bruised blue and red, I ain’t body painting.
    He ain’t give a shit about hiphop, his hobby’s hating.
    He Rocky road soft with a chocolate glazing.
    Sweet. so sweet that I bet he got full dimples.
    Uh if this is Rocky I guess Moose must be Bullwinkle.
    You couldn’t get ahead on a thread with a wool spindle.
    I’ve, uh, covered more points than a good thimble.
    It looks simple. logic. stop it, you lost this.
    You lost a lot on this site, on some Watt shit.

    That’s some current events.
    Coz uh, watts and current, like elec.. fine, forget it.

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  • RockyfifteeNo
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    Re: Rebuttal the barz above you

    Originally posted by mrbrillz View Post
    Originally posted by RockyfifteeNo View Post
    when you speak its felt cuz you're fabric soft
    speaking blasphemy get your toes cut off
    have you looking like type 2
    live the rest of your life walking the tightrope with slight hope
    sound familiar, or is fam a liar
    turn you into a mechanic and make this man retire
    BLASPHEMY// I GOT NIGGAZ THAT BLAST FOR ME// YA BITCH GIVE THE ASS TO ME// WITHOUT ME ASKIN B// THEN SHE SUCK IT TILL IT SPLASH HER TEETH// THEN SHE GO AND RUN A BATH FOR ME// ACTUALLY// ALL U NIGGAS FAGS TO ME//

    it's amazing how you rap in run-on sentences
    yet you can't even adhere to your own cadence
    you speak fictional statements in hopes to drive out your mental stasis
    homie, that's just brainless
    in reality, leaving no room for joy on a full-time basis
    so you're just displaying your insecurity to the faceless
    I think its time for you to face this
    the destination you're heading is a place for the nameless

    this is logos, how could you hate this?
    give bozos mental displacement
    when my diss puts them in their placement
    6 feet beneath the basement

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  • El chapo
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    Re: Rebuttal the barz above you

    Originally posted by StillNora View Post
    settle down retard
    Nora callin people retards put that comment on the shelf
    This pussy gets so drunk she takes advantage of herself

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  • StillNora
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    Re: Rebuttal the barz above you

    settle down retard

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