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[Street19]

Yo

I just wanted to ask for some feedback for my latest bars. Please be honest!
(I am from a not english speaking country so please also tell me the grammatically mistakes that i made)

Started on a road, now climbing fuckin‘ stairs
People die behind my way but who the fuck cares

Success is on the top nearly there rock after rock
Shooting fake friends from the top armored with a hot glock

They came so far because of me left me behind and let me bleed
But I‘ll laugh last bitch that‘s a promise we gon see

You called us all a group but I was the fuckin
Slurping you‘re fuckin soup you don‘t have to feel the heat

So where are you know, can you see that black cloud
But I don‘t need you anymore now Im rapping for a crowd

Hear the lyrics feel the basse backstage purple haze
Dont gotta see your face now I walk the lonewolf way

Silver chain feel the fame take over the rap game
Music made me change I will never be the same

Let the loser behind ma ass now I‘m a rapper how it seems
Never going back in the past long live Street19

Copyright@Street19 2017

[Feral Linguist]

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Armored with a hot glock?

You a charron fan right?

[Feral Linguist]

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*your

*i was the fuckin truth

*base

[Feral Linguist]

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Loser behind ma ass?

Don't act like i dont give you a mean reach around

[Robin Williams]

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[ame]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PWy6w6SpG7g?t=87[/ame]

[Street19]

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Thx man

It was supposed to be: But I was the fuckin WE

[Meow9]

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[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMIzTh0Lafg[/ame]

[Bnas]

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This dweeb wack he want feedback but loves the dick so much he plead sacks

[Bnas]

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WWE type shit nahmean

[Street19]

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This dweeb wack he want feedback but loves the dick so much he plead sacks

Shut up get some bread and get fat by that
and dont forget to put off ur stupid purple hat
Before I smack ur trashface purple like that stupid hat
and kick ur bitch ass of a cliffs dead end u rat

[Moose]

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I should ban you for this shit.

[xyzuxhiauedn]

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[ame="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dztURk0_DOg"]Xiu Xiu - I Luv The Valley Oh - YouTube[/ame]

[Feral Linguist]

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[MENTION=36091]Street19[/MENTION] would you share what language(s) do you use primarily, as you have stated English is not your first?

[Street19]

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[MENTION=36091]Street19[/MENTION] would you share what language(s) do you use primarily, as you have stated English is not your first?

german (Austria)